Monday, April 7, 2014

Guest Blogger Saloma Furlong on Old-Fashioned Virtues in a Digital Age: Perseverance and Networking

About seven years ago, I was a more frequent attendee at writing conferences, and among the intangibles I miss is making new writing friends, face to face. I met, and immediately click with Saloma Furlong from the first hello at a two-day conference on memoir at Trinity College in 2007. We kept in touch via email, then lost the thread – busy lives. Until late 2010, when I was assigned by ForeWord magazine to review her first memoir, and her husband David spotted the review online. Next, Saloma read at a bookstore near my New Jersey home, and we picked up as if we'd never been out of touch. I'm delighted to host Saloma here, talking about the road to publication of her first, and second, memoir.

Please welcome Saloma Furlong. 


Seventeen years elapsed from the time I first started writing for an audience to the publication of my first book. I wanted my memoir published long before, but I believe now that the story (and indeed my life) needed to evolve and develop.

I would never have become a writer if I did not have a life story I felt compelled to share. At times I was ready to ask someone else to write it — that’s how desperately I wanted it to see it in print. In retrospect, I see that it was important my story be written in my own voice, from my perspective, with the insights I’d gleaned from my life experiences. Eventually I realized I was the only person qualified to write my story.

I’ll tell you why.

I grew up Amish.

Today, Amish romance novels are big sellers. But as a native Amish person, it is excruciating for me to pick up books written by authors who’ve never been Amish themselves. They inevitably get it wrong. These authors don’t know what it’s really like to grow up in the Amish culture. Of course novelists are not restricted to writing only about the worlds they experience firsthand; if they were, there would be far less interesting fiction on the shelves. And some authors who do write Amish novels are careful researchers, though that is no substitute for the Amish mindset that comes from growing up Amish.

But I wasn't planning to write an Amish romance novel. My story was a memoir, and the idea of a ghostwriter or collaborator meant I'd have to translate a lifetime's worth of "inside information" and still risk that the book would not have the authenticity I sought.  
  
So if my story was to make it into print, it was up to me. I wrote a draft, put it away, wrote more, put the manuscript away again, pulled it out and rewrote. For years. I’d ask others to read it and give me feedback. But it wasn't until I made a connection through my contacts at Smith College (my alma mater), that I found Jeanne Braham. She became my developmental editor and helped me shape the book into final form.

Then it took six more years to find a publisher.  

Friends have told me that my middle name should be Perseverance. They might be right, because without this very Amish personality trait, I may not have been stubborn enough to continue. But I believed in my story, even after three different agents tried, and failed, to sell the manuscript. I envisioned that book in my hands for a very long time. I was not about to give up.

When I received the manuscript back from my third agent, I decided to give it one last try. If I couldn't get a publisher interested the next time out, I would have to consider publishing it myself. Many people have successfully self-published and were happy they did. But I’ve always been clear that I did not want to go into the book publishing business. I was more than happy to promote my book (which it turns out is something I enjoy almost as much as the writing), but I saw myself as a writer and wanted to collaborate with a seasoned publisher who could do all the other things to make a book successful that I did not feel equipped to do myself

I found hundreds of independent and university presses at New Pages, scoured the list to find publishers that met my criteria, read their submission guidelines, and began making—yes—simultaneous submissions. I was following the advice of one of my writing teachers about publishers requiring exclusive submissions: “Those are their rules, not mine.”

And so I dared to be so bold. I kept a chart of publishers to whom I submitted my proposal, and when I got to 33, I decided to stop, simply because 33 is my favorite number.

And then I waited and recorded the rejections.

About three months later, I received a request for the whole manuscript from Michigan State University Press. I sent it. On December 7, 2009, I received an email from Julie Loehr, the editor at Michigan State University Press, telling me I had an amazing story, and she would like to publish it. I immediately wrote back, saying I was thrilled.

A few hours later, I received an email from another university press, asking to see the whole manuscript. My mouth dropped open. I knew one thing for sure — the time for my book to be published had finally come. But now I had a dilemma: Send them the manuscript, or wait until MSU Press officially offers me a contract?

After two days of thinking it over, I went with my gut. I called MSU Press, reached Julie Loehr directly, and told her about my dilemma. She explained that MSU Press was already investing in the book by having consultants who are experts in the subject matter read it and offer editorial feedback. I promised her I would not send my manuscript to the other publisher unless MSU Press decided not to publish it.

MSU Press did publish Why I Left the Amish, in January 2011. Perseverance had paid off. 

When I was writing my next memoir, Julie Loehr and I agreed that I needed a trade publisher for that book. I thought it would be easy to find a trade publisher because by then I had that coveted thing called a "platform." I had a blog that was garnering between 500 and 1,000 hits a day. I had an author website. My first book was mildly successful, and I had been featured in the PBS documentary The Amish that aired on American Experience. I would also be appearing in the follow-up film, The Amish: Shunned.

But it was not easy at all.

I found there was a certain expectation from writer friends, agents, and publishers, that MSU Press would be publishing my second book. I needed a mid-list publisher, hard to come by these days, and if I didn't find one, I'd be faced with a choice: do I self-publish to capitalize on the timing of the second film, or do I take my time and find a traditional publisher? I started a Kickstarter campaign to self-publish.

And then my friend Shirley Showalter, whose own memoir about growing up Mennonite was about to be released, connected me to her publisher, Herald Press. This confirmed something I had thought was true — even in a digital age, old-fashioned networking is still the most effective way of making important connections.

Herald Press made a commitment to publish Bonnet Strings: An Amish Woman’s Ties to Two Worlds, the day before The Amish: Shunned premiered on PBS, on February 4, 2014.  

The message in my story, for all writers: take heart. If, even after numerous rejections, you can still imagine your story in book form, keep trying. I know in this age of instant gratification it is hard to wait, but it may be that your story is still evolving, and that the best timing is still in your future.

Whether or not you want to adopt it as a middle name, perseverance does pay off.

Note from Lisa: Saloma will be stopping by over the next week to answer any questions blog readers would like to ask – just leave them in comments. By leaving any question or comment you will also be eligible for a random drawing to receive a signed copy of Bonnet Strings (must have a U.S. postal address, and leave comment by midnight EST on Monday, April 14).

You can read more about Saloma's journey at her blog, and connect on her
Facebook page, and on Goodreads.  She appears in this video profile from the PBS American Experience documentary, “The Amish: Shunned.” 

Images: Saloma - Kerstin Martin; Sign - DavidJones/Flickr Creative Commons; others courtesy of the author.

18 comments:

Andrea said...

This certainly is an amazing level of perseverance. Stories like this fill me at once with hope and despair for the publishing world. I checked out Saloma's blog and her story sounds fascinating...I'm so glad it found its way into print!

Saloma Furlong said...
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Saloma Furlong said...

Andrea, I hope you will grasp onto the "don't despair" part of my message. Likely it will not take someone else 17 years... I had to first get used to the idea that I'd become a writer if I wrote my story. Many people know early on that they want to be writers. That is a huge step... whether we see ourselves as writers and authors. Once we do, the story will likely follow the vision. I am a huge believer in envisioning what we want in our lives, and then moving in that direction.

Thank you for the compliments about my story. It is hugely rewarding to receive comments like this, as you must know. It makes being a writer gratifying.

Cheers!
Saloma

Christi said...

Perseverance, visualizing where you want to go (or where you want your story to end up), and face to face contact. I see time and again how those things lead us closer to our goals in writing and certainly in the life we choose.

Both of these memoirs sound amazing, Saloma.

Cathy said...

I love this post for so many reasons, Lisa, so thank you for writing it.

I would love to meet Saloma someday if she ever comes back to NJ - perhaps a book signing?

As someone who is 55 and blogging and writing about disability, I've re-entered the job force after raising my son. Because I live with a disability I am limited by the number of hours a day I can work. My goal has always been to write a book - my story - and you, Saloma, have given me new hope to set about to do this Perseverance - I love it.

I am daunted by the task, but want to write my book before I am too old to remember! I need to know the right steps forward (as a beginner) and where to start. Lisa has given me her (always) sage advice, but if you have any pearly words I'd love to hear from you, too.

Thank you so much for bringing your extraordinary stories to us. I'm sure they enrich our world, and I look forward to reading both books.

Saloma Furlong said...

Christi, I'm glad these ideas spoke to you. I hope you enjoy reading my memoirs. (The first one is maybe not one most people would use the word "enjoy" to describe the experience, but I hope you find value in it).

May love and light shine on you always.

Saloma

Saloma Furlong said...

Cathy, I'm so gratified to know you have found new hope to write your memoir. I hope you do.

All of us come at the task of writing about our lives from a different perspective, so what works for one person may not work for another. Long before I wrote for an audience, I kept journals and letters. I also was able to mine the letters of several of my Vermont friends, who kept my letters and returned them to me some years later. These were all very important for me to preserve my memories. Now that I have more of a perspective than I did then, I can use these writings to trigger my memories and feelings of the events I am writing about.

Some people are able to roll all this into one... preserve the memories and write for an audience at the same time. I had to take it in steps, and preserving the memories was the first one. It feels less daunting to me when I can break it down into manageable pieces.

I wish you all the best with your life and your story.

Saloma

Katie Troyer said...

I already have a signed copy of Saloma's latest book. Instead I just want to say "Thank you" for this encouraging post.

Twila said...

I have her first book and would love to have the second one. Thanks for the chance!

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Saloma Furlong said...

Katie, that is so gracious! You are most welcome!

Saloma

Saloma Furlong said...

Twila, I hope you get to read the book. You're quite welcome.

Saloma

Laurie M said...

such an amazing story, the strength it must have taken to bare your soul this way is wonderful, you are such a brave inspirational woman,

Saloma Furlong said...

Laurie, thank you for the compliments. When you feel called to write your story, it doesn't feel like courage... it feels more like a need.

Good luck with the drawing. I hope you get to read "Bonnet Strings" either way.

Cheers,
Saloma

jsteck said...

Congratulations Saloma! I admire your passion about sharing your story. I'm just starting the process of writing a fictional novel. It is definitely a daunting task and I appreciate your encouragement.

Saloma Furlong said...

Jsteck, thank you for your kind words. And all the best to you in your own writing process.

Happy Spring!
Saloma

Karen G. said...

I finally read your book "Why I Left the Amish" and really enjoyed it. I'm have "Bonnet Strings" on my wish list and I'm looking forward to reading it. Also hoping someday I will get to meet you when you might be closer to the NY/VT border near Albany or Saratoga, NY. I don't drive at night so I am always looking at your schedule for a daytime appearance and maybe the husband will drive for a day trip!

Saloma Furlong said...

Karen, I'm so glad you enjoyed "Why I Left the Amish." I hope you get to read "Bonnet Strings" also. Many people find they like the second book better than the first.

I hope we get to meet. I don't have anything planned in the near future in your area. If you know of anything, I'd more than happy to!

Happy Spring!

Saloma

Lisa Romeo said...

Congratulations, Andrea - you are the random winner of a signed copy of Saloma's book.

Please email me your postal address!

- Lisa