Every
writer has at least one. Some, I think, realize it at the moment they reach the
last line of the finished draft of a particular piece of writing: a realization leaps up -- this is it, the one. Others only see it only in retrospect.
I'm
talking about a breakthrough piece, a
piece of writing which embodies a clear jump from one level of craft and skill
to another one, a level a good distance up the slippery hill that is our
writing climb.
Last
week, a writer with whom I have been working on and off for about three years, had
hers. I suspected it was coming, was
watching for it, hoping for her it wouldn't be much longer; and then I knew. I
knew it from the first page; it was the latest draft (number six, I believe) of a
long nonfiction narrative she's been working hard at for about seven months.
This
was her breakthrough piece.
Everything had come together - narrative arc,
character development, pacing, rhythm, language, voice, dialogue, detail,
description. There was a confidence on the page, a conviction, a assured hand,
that had not been there before.
Let
me be clear – this is a talented, hard working writer anyway, and her work is
already good. Yet she was, shall we say, working her B game, maybe B+. I knew there was an A game in her. And then,
in this particular draft, she stepped up, dramatically; she'd found her sweet
spot and I could tell it wasn't a fluke. The piece was at once both powerful
and carefully planned, and yet appeared effortless, organic.
Bam.
We
talked about it, and I was not surprised to hear that she already knew there was something different, something important about this revision. We talked about the wonder of the moment when a writer realizes how
much more she can do on the page.
Oh,
I can do that? Yes, I can
do that. I can do that. I have an A game.
That's
delicious, and a little bit terrifying. Because next, of course, comes the idea
of maintaining that A game. But that's another writing life story.
A
breakthrough, meanwhile, requires savoring.
1 comment:
I'll let you know the other side of that coin, soon! Thank you for this.
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